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   Yesterday, there was a lunar eclipse. I went through the town to tell my friends, Linny, Marty and his brother Paul. I went back in to get my camera and telephoned Evegreen who lived at the other town. We usually call her Eve for short. My friends and I went out of our houses and watch the beautiful bright eclipse.

   As soon as we saw Eve skipping along, meteor showers and bright, twinkling stars filled the sky. Suddenly, People from all towns in London crowded in the area. I was just about to get in when I appear sitting on my bed. Till then I realised that it was just a funny, intresting dream.


Please Click Here For The Chip-Chip Club Part 1 (Beginning of the Chip-Chip Club)

   One summer morning, Pih Pic the chipmunk was going to have picnic in his favorite park, Calovinia main park. As he went in the park gate, his telephone rang. It was his friend, Mih Kmount calling from not far because Pih Pic can hear her voice very clearly.

   Kmount invited him to a picnic in the park under the tree near the entrance. She also told Pih Pic that Phoney was already there. Pih Pic put down the phone and turned to his right. Under a big shady tree, he saw his two friends emptying their basket on a mat. Pih Pic hopped softly and hid behind the tree.

   Suddenly… “Boo!” shouted Kmount as she hang from the tree. Pih Pic was startled. He let out a long sigh of relief to see it was the red monster hanging upside-down. Kmount jumped down and led his surprised friend to their picnic mat.

   After a cup of warm tea, “Beep…Beep…Beep,” beeped Phoney’s emergency rescue alarm that can detect anyone or anything in danger. “Let’s get to work,” said Pih Pic. They all raced back to their tree house to get prepared as fast as they could for this was their first mission. They hopped in Kmount’s fastest red car and drove to the Royal Jungle near the Calovinia’s castle, Caalovinia with full speed.

   As soon as they got there, “Rrrr…” “It must be somewhere near us!” exclaimed Phoney, getting a signal from his new satellite. “There! The little Beaman Cub!” said Kmount. While she tried to search for a place to park her car between the trees, Pih Pic peeped from the back. “We’ll go first while you search. Don’t be too long!” he informed as he and Phoney hopped off from the car. The two friends ran to the nearby bush and saw a Beaman was tangled in some vines.

   Pih Pic and Phoney tried a lot of ways to free the Beaman, like loosen the strong vines off the little cub, break the vines and also cutting it with Pih Pic’s sharpest pen knife. Then Kmount came and tried to cut it use her largest and sharpest garden scissors. And Pih Pic tried biting the vines with his teeth but it did not work.

   Then Phoney started inspecting the vines. “I’ve got it!” he shouted excitedly as the others saw that Phoney found a little knot. “We can just untie the knot!” said Phoney. Kmount untied the knot with a stick and, “Tada!” she said as she loosen the Beaman. Then it purred happily around them. Then it ran back to its big cave. “Good work!”Pih Pic said as Kmount drove back to the park.


   One bright Sunday in Calovinia, a little brown chipmunk named Pih Pic was hopping in a park with his best friends, a little red monster named Mih Kmount and a hand-phone bright silver in colour named Phoney. Pih Pic said, “I wish I can be a great rescuer like The TTFs or The Cals” as he saw The Cals flying and jumping above him in the sky. Kmount said, “So do I. And I hope that we’ll be like them one day. How about you, Phoney? What do you  want to be?” she asked Phoney. But as Phoney was about to speak, a little meteor landed near the area.

   Pih Pic shouted, “Phoney, ring the fire brigade, Phoney!” as Phoney quickly dialled the Calovinia emergency. Kmount saw a kitten on a half-burnt tree.The branch cracked as the kitten went backwards towards the edge. Mih Kmount told Pih Pic as they ran to save it. Kmount went under the branch in case the kitten falls while Pih Pic gets a ladder to get  the kitten down. Phoney shouted at the top of his voice, “The fire brigade is here!” Kmount spun and saw the fire fighters aiming their hoses towards the big fire. She quickly but carefully brought the kitten down to safety while the others help the fire fighters.

   The next Sunday, the three friends met again in the same park. They were discussing about their great experience a week ago. Before they got home, Pih Pic got a brilliant idea. “Kmount. Phoney. How about we start a rescue team called the Chip-Chip Club.” Pih Pic said. “Briliant idea, Pih Pic! But I think its  getting late for us to discuss about it now,” said Kmount. “We’ll discuss about the team at  my house. Meet me at my house at tea time!” informed Phoney as he hopped straight to the direction of his house.

   At tea time they met at Phoney’s house and start to discuss about Chip-Chip Club. It ended up like this: Pih Pic as the leader or captain; Kmount as the vise-captain and rescuer; Phoney as the phone and designer. They even create their own title: Pih Pic the High Ranked ; Kmount, the Strong Swinger; Phoney the Wall Hole.


Beauty’s Surprise

    One day, Beauty was having her breakfast when her father flew down and  said, “I have a surprise for you upstairs.” Butter led Beauty upstairs and into the master bedroom. Butter asked Beauty to have a peek at the old cot. She was surprised to see a little female caterpillar. Beauty’s mother said that Beauty can name the caterpillar. So Beauty thought for a moment and decided to name it Cutezy beacause Cutezy is so cute.

   That afternoon, they held a celebration. Beauty invited most of her friends. They had lots of fun. They played games and ate a teddy tear shaped cake. After Beauty’s friends went home, Beauty gave Cutezy her caterpillar crown. Beauty was very happy. 


   One day, Beauty the butterfly was very excited because she was going to a school named The Butterfly School. She was in class level one and in group B1. She made lots of friends in her school.

   One day, a butterfly called Buttering came to the school. She was also in class level one and in group B1. Buttering became Beauty’s friend. They loved their school very, very much.

   The next month, on a fine breezy day, Beauty and her family moved to a new  bigger house in a bigger tree which was nearer to her school. The tree had big juicy mangoes. Her home was very clean and tidy. Beauty loved her new home very much.


Click here for ‘Dimond’s wish (part 1)’

Click here for ‘Dimond’s wish (part 2)’

Click here for ‘Dimond’s wish (part 3)’

   Three weeks passed and they had already met a lot of animals, for example a tall giraffe, a herd of elephants, a nest of ants and a big grey gorilla. They also met all kinds of birds that the kids had never seen before, for example eagles, peacocks, king fishers and hawks. They got a banana from the gorilla and an apple from the giraffe. “We will be home tomorrow”, Deramba said to Dimond and Fairam.

   They climbed up a mountain and prepared food for dinner. After dinner, they sat and watched the beautiful sunset. Soon it was time to put up their tents. Deramba called for the kids. Fairam and Racanda was trying to count the stars while Dimond was trying to climb a small tree nearby. They then set up three tents and went to bed.

  The next day, they arrived at a familiar pond with ducks quacking happily. Dimond quickly remembered that the pond was near his stable. They all raced to the stable. Dimond and Deramba trotted inside to meet Diamalak while Fairam flew to the hut. Racanda went to the nearest tree and perched on a branch. At tea time, Racanda informed the others that she will be going back to her home the next day and will be returning back the next month.

  The next day, Dimond and Fairam went to Racanda’s tree to help her pack up her things. Dimond gave her a small jar of strawberry jam. Fairam gave her a picture of them watching the sunset together. Then Diamalak called the kids in for breakfast. After they all had their breakfast, they waved to Racanda until they cannot see her any more. “I have a new ambition. Guess what?”, Dimond asked. “An explorer that explore the whole Samenine?”, said Fairam. “Not really, but a great explorer that explores other planet for example… EARTH!”,answered Dimond.


    This is Beauty Buttery Butter the butterfly. She was four years old. She had a big, beautiful and colourful pair of wings. 

    Her wings were light blue, light red and dark purple in colour. Like other butterflies, her body was divided into three parts, head, thorax and abdomen. She had two black curly antennas.Her favourite food were nectar, butter with bread, orange, durian and mango. She even liked crackers with butter.

    One day, as Beauty was having her breakfast, her father flew down and  said, “I have a surprise for you upstairs.” Butter led Beauty upstairs and into the master bedroom. Butter asked Beauty to have a peek at the old cot. She was surprised to see a little female caterpillar. Beauty’s mother said that Beauty can name the caterpillar. So Beauty thought for a moment and decided to name it Cutezy because Cutezy is so cute.

   That afternoon, they held a celebration. Beauty invited most of her friends. They had lots of fun. They played games and ate a teddy tear shaped cake. After Beauty’s friends went home, Beauty gave Cutezy her caterpillar crown. Beauty was very happy.

    One morning, Beauty was carrying Cutezy while flying with Cherry . They were talking about their favorite flower. Then they saw a beautiful butterfly flying towards them. As the butterfly approached them she said, “Hello, my name is Buttercup. I am six years old. What is your name?” “My name is Beauty. I am eight years old. This is my friend Cherry and my little sister Cutezy.”, answered Beauty. As they got to know each other, they began to play. They created a few songs and took turns taking care of Cutezy.

   Soon, it was tea time. But before they went home, Buttercup invited them for tea the next day. Her two friends accepted the invitation and went home.


Click here for Dimond’s Wish.

Click here for Dimond’s Wish Part 2.

It was Deramba’s good friend,Fillion.

Fillion, the king of the forest

Fillion was a lion and he is the king of the forest. He is a very good leader and every one like him.

“Can you lead us out of the forest again?” Deramba asked Fillion. “No problem.” Fillion answered. “By the way, where is your son?” He asked.Dimond went out of his hiding place and he said in a low voice, “Hello, my name is Dimond.”

Soon they started to cross the forest. Dimond and his friends discovered a lot of new things and games. They make new friends every time they stop.

At the end of the forest, they saw a herd of elephants crossing. So they waited for the elephants to pass. They thanked Filion gratefully and say good bye to Filion.They trotted while Fairam and Racanda flew.They have fun every time they break near the river. They jump on rocks and play throw pebbles in the river.

To Be Continued


Click here for Dimond’s wish.

Off Dimond went to get ready quickly but before that he went to asked Fairam, ” Thank you for teaching me how to build a hut. Would you like to come with me and my father  to explore around Samenine? Oh, please say yes. We can build another hut together.” ”Of course, I would love to come with you,” Fairam replied. ”Don’t forget that we are going tomorrow!” shouted Dimond as he trotted towards his stable.


The next day, Dimond and Fairam went out of their new hut. Suddenly there came a loud rumbling sound that shook Dimond and their new hut. ”What is that loud and rumbling noise? ” asked Dimond. ”I don’t know,”replied Fairam.

Deramba pulling the big cart

It was Deramba pulling something big, brown and old. ”What is that?” asked Dimond.”Well, it is a very old cart from your grandfather, Dimond,” Deramba answered. So they all put their bags onto the cart. Fairam taught Dimond how to make new friends while Dimond helped his father pull the cart.

Soon it was night. Before Dimond had dinner, he met a bird named Racanda. Her mother was Rancindri. She was Dimond‘s mother, Diamalak’s friend. Dimond and Fairam made friends with Racanda the pink humming bird. She was a so cute, tiny, pretty and shy.

Before Dimond had dinner


The next day, the three of them and Racanda started their trip. Fairam told his friends the names of  the trees and plants along the way. A few hours later they arrived at a forest. After walking for two minutes, something big and fierce pounce in front of them.

To Be Continued…


One day, a strawberry fell down from a strawberry plant onto a pile of leaves. It jumped out of the pile of leaves and looked up towards the strawberry plant and sadly hopped  away.

Soon she met an apple tree. The apple tree asked her, “Hello what is your  name? My name is Apry. I’m an apple tree.”  “I don’t have any name”, answered the strawberryApry lifted the strawberry and thought of a name. Suddenly he said, “How about Berry?”, Apry excitedly suggested. The strawberry agreed with the name. At that moment, an apple fell down onto a pile of apple leaves. In a few minutes Berry and Applanka the apple became good friends. They said goodbye to Apry and hopped out of the apple orchard while playing and talking about the view from their tree and plant.

Berry agrees with the name as Aplanka fell

The next day, Berry was back on the strawberry plant where she supposed to be. Berry realised that the adventure was just a dream.

The End


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